Return to Carnegie Hall
π€ the story changea a little from what I expected. Ben looks a little tall, and was supposed to be on the passenger side. Not the driver side on the wheel π The idea of the story is still there except for the placement π€ A cinematic wide shot establishes the elegant, snowy entrance of Carnegie Hall at night, with an NYPD police car parked at the curb and an usher waiting. Ben Dollis steps out of the police car and is greeted with a formal bow by the usher, to which he responds with a polite nod. Ben walks to the back of the car and opens the door for Aya Brea, offering his hand with a warm smile. Aya Brea gracefully exits the car, takes Ben's hand, and they turn to face the entrance together as snow falls.


